My first poem....
I just waited for u to come ,I had my eyes glued on the door,
for I expected u to come through.
I waited and waited with baited breath,
that some day I'll see u,
feel u,touch u!
I waited eagerly
for that 'unpriceable' moment,
that glad, happening moment
when I can see u
when u'll take me away
to a far off land
and make me forget my world..!
ps: this was my first attempt at poetry. I had written this poem sometime in 2002. thats wat my diary says..:)
3 comments:
This might be ur first try in poems..but i really seriously loved these lines..They r simple , let me tell u tat there is no need for sugary sweet vocabulary to express emotions..Its the feel and the meaning that ur poem should convey..yours did it..i can feel the emotion..perfect try....write more n let me enjoy them :-)
-haripriya
@ hari... thank u so much hari... :)
remember twas in in 2003.. to b presice on 30th june 2003
LIAR !!!! :) :)
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