Sunday, December 23, 2007

A kiddish try

My first poem....

I just waited for u to come ,

to grab me and take me with u,

I had my eyes glued on the door,

for I expected u to come through.

I waited and waited with baited breath,

that some day I'll see u,

feel u,touch u!

I waited eagerly

for that 'unpriceable' moment,

that glad, happening moment

when I can see u

when u'll take me away

to a far off land

and make me forget my world..!

ps: this was my first attempt at poetry. I had written this poem sometime in 2002. thats wat my diary says..:)

3 comments:

HARI said...

This might be ur first try in poems..but i really seriously loved these lines..They r simple , let me tell u tat there is no need for sugary sweet vocabulary to express emotions..Its the feel and the meaning that ur poem should convey..yours did it..i can feel the emotion..perfect try....write more n let me enjoy them :-)

-haripriya

Anonymous said...

@ hari... thank u so much hari... :)

Prem said...

remember twas in in 2003.. to b presice on 30th june 2003



LIAR !!!! :) :)